The Duel Of The World.(Character sheet)

[amy1]

Hello,Amy here.

This Is called The Duel Of The World As you can see so,here's the story.

My name is Anna Rosella,I'm lost in life with nothing to do.
I've been traped in many thoughts of time.As i got older and older 2012 came.I didn't know that this the world might end...Why think this?It almost happened....when is was sixteen it happened nearly i would say the world was about to end.Many things came I had no idea so,scared...dreadful...When Decemember 21th people kept looking into the sky because they saw the sun went black fully balck so did the sky.What the heck i thought then you could see blue starts falling i the sky,gosh.I was scared then is started to rain more,more and more...Something came on the news that is said LOCK windows and doors.Gee,scary this was but,It's not over...I didn't see the news i went outside i saw the demon-like figure it came closer and closer i screamed...Why now?i sighed i walked over to it carefully and slow.Then It hit me.Wow,when will this stop?It's been two weeks now.Too much murders came by i couldn't handle it...I picked to gear up and fight my way.I grabed a knife some food ammo a gunand a plank.Why?It's time to end this.This shall stop now,now...it will...It's still going on...Will i make it?

So,That's it so far well,until we have people to start~This will be a character sheet,also.


Name: Anan Rosella

Age: sixteen

Gender:Female

Bio: Ever since she was small she always was thinking ad doing things for others,until one day she decides the help the world will people join?Maybe or Maybe not.It's her story to live.

Weapon Knife and a Gun.

Inventory: Ammo,food,knife,plank,pocket watch and a pearl necklace.

Apearance: Long light brown hair,always has a bracelet on has dark blue eyes with dark eyebrows and dark skin.









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[Sbacity_Boy]

Wow, sounds intense so far.

[Thisismyusername]

wow.............

[screwbaII]

I can't understand the story, it doesn't make sense, and it just looks like one large word to me. You should space once after commas and twice after fullstops.

[Madi2]

I can't understand the story, it doesn't make sense, and it just looks like one large word to me. You should space once after commas and twice after fullstops.

It's about a girl getting older and December 21 2010 the sky will turn gray and everyone will say "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" or somethig like that I think

[Clandestine]

Pretty intense, except for a couple things.
1. In 2012, the solar flare activity is going to increase. There's going to be a jump in sun storms. The sun won't be turning black until a gajillion years from now.
2. Stars won't be flooding from the sky. What might actually happen is an enviromental catastrophe, like earthquakes, massive flooding, volcanos erupting simultaneously.
Because of the natural disasters, I kind of doubt if one can do anything against it.

But people going crazy is likely to happen though. The solar activity does have some kind of an effect on people's behavior. (I forgot the science behind it. Something about biorhythm)
Also.. everyone's going to die, so murdering a bunch of others won't matter because everyone's going to die anyway. :]

[screwbaII]

It's predicted there will be a polar shift, due to the gravitational alignment of the earth with the sun and the black hole at the centre of the galaxy. No one can really predict what will happen, but it happens every 25 000 years or so, I doubt much will happen. As Clands said, even if something happened it would be on Earth, and involve the continental plates shifting at drastic rates causing earthquakes and volcanic eruptions.

[Riida]

btw this RP looks horrible.

I doubt anything extremely serious is going to happen in 2012, though. They were wrong about 2000, why wouldn't they be wrong about 2012?

[screwbaII]

Mayans didn't predict 2000, neither did the I Ching.

[Clandestine]

Yeah. Like Screw said.
Y2k was something based off of... nothing, I think.

2012 at least has some science behind it with the 25000 year solistice. And the Mayans were able to predict a lot of events from astrology alone, thus making 2012 a little more credible than Y2k.
Either way, I doubt if we're going to die. If we do though, makes one wonder who's going to find our remains. xD

[Ivernus]

Seems like this thread has been derailed of topic a fair bit XD.
Also people, no need to be overly critical of the rp, if theres issues with the rp its better to try to help the person make the idea better than just shut them down.

That said...as Screw has pointed out though, the text definetly needs to be broken up properly and make it easier on the eyes.
As for the actually story, while what you said helps to set the scene, there needs to be some more substaintial background information to the rp otherwise it lacks sustenance and as such would be really hard to get going. If you need help coming up with more ideas for the backstory, I'd recommend posting a brainstorming thread to get a bunch of ideas from everyone and just take the ones you like from it and work it into an rp.

@Offtopic
As for the whole 2012 thing...sure the Mayans predicted the 'end of the world' would happen in 2012, but I always wonder this, "What did the Mayans see the whole world as?"
If we assume they're prediction is right, what if they only define the 'world' as the area they lived in? or only the country they lived in? I highly doubt a global disaster that wipes out the entire planet would happen but it will be interestting to see

And that whole 2000 things? Computers weren't originally made to be able to store the data values past 1999 so people were afraid when everything clicked over to 2000, every computer would die or something like that...I remember reading that somewhere but I can't remember if it was the real thing or a thing someone made up to mock the event XD

[screwbaII]

Agreed with what Ivernus said about the rp.

Yea, the Y2K was about the computers freaking out over the 000 digit and stopping working.

The mayans made pretty accurate predictions in the past, including the arrival of the Spanish Conquistadors which brought about their demise. About the yr 2012 they spoke about the black hole in the centre of the galaxy (obviously they called it something different in line with their culture, but essentially it was the same thing), and the alignment of the earth and sun with that. However they predicted the end of an era, not necessarily the end of the world and all that jazz. In any case it's believed a polar shift will happen, but that has also happened in the past and we are still around, so I'm not worried about it at all.

[Clandestine]

...Yeah... Ivernus totally refreshed my memory on that. xD
Something about binary codes.

There're beliefs that 2012 is a year of enlightenment, or something like that.

The worst that can happen is there being hundreds of riots going at once.

[screwbaII]

Actually the worst thing that can happen is the earth's crust shifting really fast (and by really fast I mean a few metres) which would cause earthquakes and volcanic eruptions and as a result, monumental tidal waves. In any case that is one predicted scenario and it's a worst case scenario, and everyone knows worst case scenarios never happen -D