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Saya67257
01-02-2010, 03:23 AM
On a sunny afternoon, a new baby :baby: was born in that afternoon.
"Oh honey, hes so handsome"The mother, :coriander1: said glaring at her baby with her shiny eyes."Yes,he is quite a handsome one, what shall we call him dear?"The father, :bunnipriest: said grabbing his wifes hand."Well, why dont we call him...Doris"The mother said.
On the next day, Doris's mother went to the store to buy dinner.The father had to watch over his son on that day.
Then, all of a sudden, the :bunniking: came into their house."Hello Mr.Bunni,
i need to speak with you please."The King said."Yes Sir"The father said going toward the King. As soon as them 2 were finished, the father looked sad and had tears dripping from his eyes.The mother had died.
Doris didnt understand what was going on because he was just a baby and he just played with his rattle,but the father picked him up and went outside to the Bunni Foster Home."Doris, its time for you to go."The father said with tears in his eyes."I cannot take care of you any longer...you will have to stay here."He continued. Since the father of Doris signed Doris up in the foster home, Doris cried for his father, but Doris looked at his father ouitside crying for his mercy for him to come back.Then,he said his first word...Daddy.
After a few years, Doris was 12 and still lived in the foster home begging to go play with the other bunni children."Miss Lynch, may i go play with the other children?"Doris pleaded the women."Okay, go ahead"She said opening the outside door. Since Doris went outside, everybody gathered around and stared at Doris telling each other gossips about him."Hey guys, want to play?" Doris said."No, you arent allowed to"one of them said.
Later, Doris lay on his bed sadly and wanting someone to play with,but on that moment, 2 couples came to adopt a child, and they looked around and had finally seen Doris."Oh, how cute, we should get him honey" one of them said."Well, he is grown up...yeah lets keep him"the other said.
Doris didnt know what was going on, so he sat up afraid."Whats-whats going on here?"Doris asked."Well Doris, your being adaopted by these pleasent couples."Miss Lynch said
TO BE CONTINUED....
thebunni15
01-02-2010, 04:49 AM
I'm sensing this series is going to be epic. :)
Saya67257
01-02-2010, 03:24 PM
yep i think it is going to be epic ^_^
Saya67257
01-02-2010, 04:17 PM
When Doris still didnt know what was going on, Miss Lynch told him everything."Doris,you are going to stay with them,okay?"She said."Umm...okay"Doris said with a scared voice."Dont worry,we will not scare you we just want to love you as a son Doris."One of them said."Yeah.just think that we are your freinds."he said."But...okay."Doris said then held one of there hands.
After a long while, Doris and the couple had shown Doris their home."Wow...its so beautiful here...and its so clean."Doris said touching everything."Well, you can touch but dont break it okay Doris?"His foster mother, :coriander2: said."Oh, and do you want to see your new room?"His foster dad, :bunnipriest: said. When Doris ran upstairs and finally went into his room, he was amazed."Wow...my room its..its clean and just how i wanted."Doris said still touching everything."Well we hope you like it Doris, we did everything just for you."His foster dad said holding his wifes hand.
On the next day, Doris wanted to go outside to play."Mom, Dad can i go outside?"Doris said in front of his foster parents."Well...okay sure."His foster mother said.Doris ran outside happily, but just remnembered...he wanted freinds."I need some freinds..."Doris said to himself.Then some kids came toward him."Hey, whats your name?"One of them said."Im Doris"Doris said with a smile."Oh, im Dan, and these are my freinds, Stacy,Lucy,and Bruce."Dan said."Hi, do you want to play with me?"Doris said."Sure, lets go to the park."Lucy said.
While the kids were playing at the park, the foster parents of Doris were watching him playing happily and thought about when they saw Doris outside at the foster Home when no one played with him."Ah, honey Doris is happy...and we're happy."Doris's foster mother said holding her husbands hand."He sure is happy...and happy children means happy parents."Doris's foster dad said.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Saya67257
01-02-2010, 10:37 PM
"Im just happy we have our own child..."Doris's foster mother said still holding her husbands hand."Me too...but since its almost Christmas, what do you thinkwe should get him?"Doris's foster dad asked."Hmm...why dont we just ask him? We dont have to keep it a secret...anyway, i dont think his real parents asked him."Doris's foster mother said and giggled.
While Doris was playing with his new freinds,Doris figured out that Lucy liked him."Hey Doris, what do you want to do?"Lucy asked."Well...i dont know."Doris said."Want to hear a secret?"Lucy asked again."Sure."Doris said walking toward Lucy.
In Lucy's words, Doris was blushing while he heard those words in his own ears, suddenly, Doris had fallen in love with her."Hey guys,whats going on?"Dan asked running to Doris and Lucy."I think i know...hehehehehe"Bruce said smiling."No!"Lucy said and got a thick stick and banged Bruces head."Whoa...will he be okay?"Doris asked."Yeah...he will, hes been hited with this stick like...24 times."Lucy said smiling brightly then giggled.
When Doris went home when it was almost dark outside, he ate dinner with his foster parents."So,how was it while playing with your new freinds?"Doris's foster mother asked."Well, it was great and i was nrevous..."Doris answered."Wow, i bet you had a fun time playing with your newest freinds,huh?"Doris's foster dad asked."Yup, i had a great time with them,we played lots of things that i never played before."Doris said then took a sip if his drink.Well, we have to go to bed when everybody finishes."Doris's foster mother said. When everybody was finished with their food, Doris went in his room."Good night Doris."Doris's foster parents said from his door."Good night, mom and dad."Doris said then snuggled in his bed,then suddenly fell asleep peacefully.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Mishakiara
01-18-2010, 09:17 PM
This is one awesome series *goes to subscribe*
LoveyCookies
01-18-2010, 10:12 PM
Vair vair good. I like the idea of a world with just bunnis..
On a sunny afternoon, a new baby :baby: was born in that afternoon.
"Oh honey, hes so handsome"The mother, :coriander1: said glaring at her baby with her shiny eyes."Yes,he is quite a handsome one, what shall we call him dear?"The father, :bunnipriest: said grabbing his wifes hand."Well, why dont we call him...Doris"The mother said.
On the next day, Doris's mother went to the store to buy dinner.The father had to watch over his son on that day.
Then, all of a sudden, the :bunniking: came into their house."Hello Mr.Bunni,
i need to speak with you please."The King said."Yes Sir"The father said going toward the King. As soon as them 2 were finished, the father looked sad and had tears dripping from his eyes.The mother had died.
Doris didnt understand what was going on because he was just a baby and he just played with his rattle,but the father picked him up and went outside to the Bunni Foster Home."Doris, its time for you to go."The father said with tears in his eyes."I cannot take care of you any longer...you will have to stay here."He continued. Since the father of Doris signed Doris up in the foster home, Doris cried for his father, but Doris looked at his father ouitside crying for his mercy for him to come back.Then,he said his first word...Daddy.
After a few years, Doris was 12 and still lived in the foster home begging to go play with the other bunni children."Miss Lynch, may i go play with the other children?"Doris pleaded the women."Okay, go ahead"She said opening the outside door. Since Doris went outside, everybody gathered around and stared at Doris telling each other gossips about him."Hey guys, want to play?" Doris said."No, you arent allowed to"one of them said.
Later, Doris lay on his bed sadly and wanting someone to play with,but on that moment, 2 couples came to adopt a child, and they looked around and had finally seen Doris."Oh, how cute, we should get him honey" one of them said."Well, he is grown up...yeah lets keep him"the other said.
Doris didnt know what was going on, so he sat up afraid."Whats-whats going on here?"Doris asked."Well Doris, your being adaopted by these pleasent couples."Miss Lynch said
TO BE CONTINUED....
i love it.pleas make the next one soon
this is really go so far : D
Lyshomasta
04-07-2010, 10:27 AM
Aw man, whyd he stop writing his story? It was good, but it needed a bigger conflict for tension(or at least in my opinion, I guess I'm just in that mood right now, I just read a detective story it was EPIC)
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