Bunni: Our first war

[Sonic12134]

It's finnally a battle of :bunniking::coriander2::bunni::fox::panda: against :peach::piratemonster::piratebunni::piratefox: :piratepanda: and how do you beat them? three words..... GET TO WORK!!! choose your side and do as much work as you can. IF you lose on bunni king side, you'll have to marry peach or if peach wins you marry bunni king and if bunni king wins he will blow up the pirates! And if peach loses her ship will blow up. An epic battle plus minigames and character book!

[thebunni15]

You should probably add some rules on how to play.

[zlyfire]

give more detail other than a paragraph maybe? like, signup sheet, rules, getting to work? describe what you mean, who will be whom, etc. etc. think before posting

[Sonic12134]

give more detail other than a paragraph maybe? like, signup sheet, rules, getting to work? describe what you mean, who will be whom, etc. etc. think before posting

Ok well signup sheet i'm not sure but rules are you have to get as many work as you can then the other team first you choose either Bunnis or Pirates. Bunni side they have 2 playable characters which are King Bunni and Corliander, the partners are bunnis, foxes and pandas. On the pirate side, they is only one playable character and that is Pirate Peach, your partners are a pirate monsters, pirate bunnis, pirate foxes and pirate pandas. You can also attack the other island by using deer. (Pirate deer on pirate side) i quess thats all the infomation for now.

[elpuntthing]

I still don't understand.

[zlyfire]

i say, DIE THREAD, unless the OP SPECIFIES a bi more. like you said get work? how do you do that? how will the battles be played out? etc etc. look at the other roleplays as an example of how to make a proper roleplay, then make one(in this case, look at other then specify more)

[Sonic12134]

i say, DIE THREAD, unless the OP SPECIFIES a bi more. like you said get work? how do you do that? how will the battles be played out? etc etc. look at the other roleplays as an example of how to make a proper roleplay, then make one(in this case, look at other then specify more)

OK, i'm going to repeat myself one more time, you get to work by getting your partners in a windmill for chopping trees or mine field for mining or a resturant for cooking. You can get more partners by buying them at the shop at the center of the island. And how will the battles play out? Well, RPG of course, you can go on the opponents island but if you touch there partners, then you do an RPG battle. You can also buy items at the same shop where you get the partners, you can get invisability potion, shield, and even battle weapons or new powers for battles. Well that took alotof typing, so..... that is the last time i will repeat myself.

[elpuntthing]

I still don't understand.

[screwbaII]

I don't think you know how roleplaying works, sonic, so I'll give you a few tips.

First you need a character sheet so people can actually sign up for your rp. Character sheets allow people to give a better description of their character and/or nominate to take a character i.e. bunni king.

Second if you are going to have shops and stuff, you need to set a currency and you need to set the items in the shop and what they are used for. You can't just make up things on the spot otherwise people will have no idea what you're talking about.

A plot is nowhere near enough information to start an rp. Thus, no one will join this one because it is not finished and not well thought out at all. You have a basic plot but you have not explained any of the details, and the details are what people need to be able to roleplay properly. How do you work? What determines the resources? How do you sign up? What are the minigames? How do the battles work? What determines victory? What are the minigames? How do the minigames work? What is the use of the minigames in relation to the rp? etc. etc.

There are A LOT of holes in your concept, don't just assume everyone is going to instantly know what is on your mind or how to play otherwise this is never going to work for you. You need to tell people the rules, the details, how things work, why things work the way they do. You need to do A LOT more work on this. My RP (Draconis) had an initial 5 posts to describe everything going on and I still missed out on so many things, and that's not including all of the dragons and their descriptions, not to mention Ivernus was working with me to come up with it. I'm still describing stuff as we go along and come across things I have missed out on. A successful rp needs details, so do as someone suggested and read some of the other rps like Novus and Draconis and figure out how to come up with your details.

[dracobreeder]

I could maybe offer a few tips, reply to me in this thread and we'll work together over PMs to get the RP sorted out.

[thebunni15]

How about two RP's.

The Bunni Story

The Pirate Story

?